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Comic 103 - 85 batgirl

25th Nov 2011, 6:40 PM in Damsel and Distress
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85 batgirl
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Kai Faydale 25th Nov 2011, 6:40 PM edit delete
Kai Faydale
I hope everyone had to good black Friday. I would have set up a sale or something for the shirts but It doesn’t look like it would matter since no one wants to buy any :( If you DO want a shirt or don't want me to feel all depressed inside check out the links below.

Something different
sweet & innocent
And last but not least words


Twitchy Fan 25th Nov 2011, 8:44 PM edit delete reply
Twitchy Fan
Three Batman jokes!! Well played indeed.
Wonder if Avatar me is going to approach other main characters as well, or does that cut into the profits?
Kai Faydale 26th Nov 2011, 12:47 AM edit delete reply
Kai Faydale
There will be one other character you meet in this scene. if you want your avatar brought back after that you should donate to a kickstarter campaign.
Trasee Darkwatch 25th Nov 2011, 9:30 PM edit delete reply
Trasee Darkwatch
Sorry, Twitchy, but I think the Avatar you still needs a good batting. :P ;)
Kai Faydale 27th Nov 2011, 12:21 AM edit delete reply
Kai Faydale
why? the guy in yellow fainted because of Robin not Twitchy ;P
Trasee Darkwatch 27th Nov 2011, 9:41 AM edit delete reply
Trasee Darkwatch
He fainted with relief? Or fainted because a girl is saving him? No matter, he's still a wuss. :P ;)
Kai Faydale 27th Nov 2011, 5:51 PM edit delete reply
Kai Faydale
He fainted because the scary main character showed up (putting him on panel) and has a bat!
Wisknort 27th Nov 2011, 7:08 AM edit delete reply
Oh. I reached the latest. I swear, whenever I'm reading through the archives of a new comic, I'll be like 10 from the current and be perfectly aware of it. And this will continue for the next however many pages. Then I'll hit the end and be taken completely by surprise. @_@

ANYWAY. Yeah, you have another reader now. Hey all.

I'm trying to work out how the shirts thing works currently, I'm thinking I might buy one. (Probably the words one, which sadly has nothing towards it yet. :()

Also, three Batman jokes? I only found the most obvious one. :/
(I did notice the "yellow-bellied" joke, and am surprised Twitchy doesn't have a face-full of bat yet. Is it a Batman joke though?)

Also, looking for an editor? To be blunt, your typing/English is atrocious. >_>
Wisknort 27th Nov 2011, 7:09 AM edit delete reply
Huh, logins and stuff. I'll deal with that later. Being able to edit my comments would be good.

Anyway, I'm posting again to say: Flawless victory! Lol'd at this.
Trasee Darkwatch 27th Nov 2011, 9:39 AM edit delete reply
Trasee Darkwatch need for the "bat girl"...
...the next "joker"...
...Okay "Robin"...
1...2...3... :D
Twitchy Fan 27th Nov 2011, 4:04 PM edit delete reply
Twitchy Fan
I know right! The words shirt is awesome, unfortunately near Christmas time I have to scrap my meager funds for other people instead of myself. Any other time I would go for it : (

Unless you have serious problems with the flow of dialogue, it is fine to just post the "problem" and a suggested correction in a separate comment. Kai has admin powers and can remove the comment when he uploads a new version of the page.

And finally glad to have you with us Wisknort.
Kai Faydale 27th Nov 2011, 5:55 PM edit delete reply
Kai Faydale
First welcome to the comic and thanks for reading!

as for the spelling anytime someone has pointed out an error i correct it immediately but I do struggle with a few learning disabilities so i would love any editing you are willing to throw my way. just make the spelling and grammar corrections in a separate comment so i can delete it after i fix it please.
Wisknort 27th Nov 2011, 8:13 PM edit delete reply
Ah, learning disabilities. What fun.

Panel 2, top-right bubble (no punctuation):
Not actually sure what to do to this... It doesn't work as it is, but an obvious solution isn't presenting itself.
"That is your name, right?"
This rework is the best thing I'm coming up with.
Kai Faydale 27th Nov 2011, 9:19 PM edit delete reply
Kai Faydale
ya that line ( and most variations) requires the right rhythm which is guess is hard to convey in text.
so i went in a bit of a different direction. you like it better this way?
Wisknort 27th Nov 2011, 10:45 PM edit delete reply
Definitely. It adds another mention of the bat. :D
Kai Faydale 28th Nov 2011, 5:59 AM edit delete reply
Kai Faydale
oh if you have any confusion as to how buying a shirt would work the simplest way would be to donate $20 and you will get a shirt mailed to you once they print. you can donate more ( which i would of course appreciate) and get more goodies as well as the shirt.
Francisco 27th Nov 2011, 2:43 PM edit delete reply
How did he know her name?
Twitchy Fan 27th Nov 2011, 4:02 PM edit delete reply
Twitchy Fan
Can't say for certain. But it is likely because it is an Avatar. They are representations of people in the real world(in this case mine) and as such tend to have some extra privileges and knowledge
Kai Faydale 27th Nov 2011, 5:56 PM edit delete reply
Kai Faydale
the next page will go into more detail explain it too :)