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Page 85 batgirl

85 batgirl
Average Rating: 5 (1 votes)

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27th Aug 2017, 1:34 AM
I hope everyone had to good black Friday. I would have set up a sale or something for the shirts but It doesn’t look like it would matter since no one wants to buy any :( If you DO want a shirt or don't want me to feel all depressed inside check out the links below.

Something different
sweet & innocent
And last but not least words

Comments:

Three Batman jokes!! Well played indeed.
Wonder if Avatar me is going to approach other main characters as well, or does that cut into the profits?

25th Nov 2011, 8:44 PM edit delete reply

There will be one other character you meet in this scene. if you want your avatar brought back after that you should donate to a kickstarter campaign.

26th Nov 2011, 12:47 AM edit delete reply

Sorry, Twitchy, but I think the Avatar you still needs a good batting. :P ;)

25th Nov 2011, 9:30 PM edit delete reply

why? the guy in yellow fainted because of Robin not Twitchy ;P

27th Nov 2011, 12:21 AM edit delete reply

He fainted with relief? Or fainted because a girl is saving him? No matter, he's still a wuss. :P ;)

27th Nov 2011, 9:41 AM edit delete reply

He fainted because the scary main character showed up (putting him on panel) and has a bat!

27th Nov 2011, 5:51 PM edit delete reply

Oh. I reached the latest. I swear, whenever I'm reading through the archives of a new comic, I'll be like 10 from the current and be perfectly aware of it. And this will continue for the next however many pages. Then I'll hit the end and be taken completely by surprise. @_@

ANYWAY. Yeah, you have another reader now. Hey all.

I'm trying to work out how the shirts thing works currently, I'm thinking I might buy one. (Probably the words one, which sadly has nothing towards it yet. :()

Also, three Batman jokes? I only found the most obvious one. :/
(I did notice the "yellow-bellied" joke, and am surprised Twitchy doesn't have a face-full of bat yet. Is it a Batman joke though?)

Also, looking for an editor? To be blunt, your typing/English is atrocious. >_>

27th Nov 2011, 7:08 AM edit delete reply

Huh, logins and stuff. I'll deal with that later. Being able to edit my comments would be good.

Anyway, I'm posting again to say: Flawless victory! Lol'd at this.

27th Nov 2011, 7:09 AM edit delete reply

...no need for the "bat girl"...
...the next "joker"...
...Okay "Robin"...
1...2...3... :D

27th Nov 2011, 9:39 AM edit delete reply

I know right! The words shirt is awesome, unfortunately near Christmas time I have to scrap my meager funds for other people instead of myself. Any other time I would go for it : (

Unless you have serious problems with the flow of dialogue, it is fine to just post the "problem" and a suggested correction in a separate comment. Kai has admin powers and can remove the comment when he uploads a new version of the page.

And finally glad to have you with us Wisknort.

27th Nov 2011, 4:04 PM edit delete reply

First welcome to the comic and thanks for reading!

as for the spelling anytime someone has pointed out an error i correct it immediately but I do struggle with a few learning disabilities so i would love any editing you are willing to throw my way. just make the spelling and grammar corrections in a separate comment so i can delete it after i fix it please.

27th Nov 2011, 5:55 PM edit delete reply

Ah, learning disabilities. What fun.

Panel 2, top-right bubble (no punctuation):
Not actually sure what to do to this... It doesn't work as it is, but an obvious solution isn't presenting itself.
"That is your name, right?"
This rework is the best thing I'm coming up with.

27th Nov 2011, 8:13 PM edit delete reply

ya that line ( and most variations) requires the right rhythm which is guess is hard to convey in text.
so i went in a bit of a different direction. you like it better this way?

27th Nov 2011, 9:19 PM edit delete reply

Definitely. It adds another mention of the bat. :D

27th Nov 2011, 10:45 PM edit delete reply

oh if you have any confusion as to how buying a shirt would work the simplest way would be to donate $20 and you will get a shirt mailed to you once they print. you can donate more ( which i would of course appreciate) and get more goodies as well as the shirt.

28th Nov 2011, 5:59 AM edit delete reply

How did he know her name?

27th Nov 2011, 2:43 PM edit delete reply

Can't say for certain. But it is likely because it is an Avatar. They are representations of people in the real world(in this case mine) and as such tend to have some extra privileges and knowledge

27th Nov 2011, 4:02 PM edit delete reply

the next page will go into more detail explain it too :)

27th Nov 2011, 5:56 PM edit delete reply

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