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Comic 37 - 34 Budget cuts

26th Jul 2011, 11:20 PM in Somewhere
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Kai Faydale 26th Jul 2011, 11:20 PM edit delete
Kai Faydale
the next little bit is going to be a bit wordy. Sadly all my wonderful schooling on pacing and tension doesn’t deal with pictures so I am experimenting a bit here. If anyone has feed back that would be wonderful. I never really payed attention to pacing in comics specifically before and everything I learned deals with words only. That and since I am posting 5 days a week some people are reading it all at once while others read it a day at a time. I am working to please everybody but there will be a bit of a learning curve. Some spots will be a bit slow, some too wordy, and some too fast. If you let me know which are which I wont have to spend as much time second guessing and can instead work on improving the script that I don't acknowledge exists.

Comments:

LooeyQ 27th Jul 2011, 11:28 AM edit delete reply
LooeyQ
narrators were what?!!!
Kai Faydale 27th Jul 2011, 4:02 PM edit delete reply
Kai Faydale
I don't want to repeat what she was trying to say on panel before i cut her off. it really wasn't family friendly.
drmikeo 27th Jul 2011, 11:01 PM edit delete reply
so she could pull something thick air ?? moist air ?? loud air??
Kai Faydale 27th Jul 2011, 11:49 PM edit delete reply
Kai Faydale
according to the rule of funny yes. the trick is telling thick air form think.