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in Damsel and Distress

27th Aug 2017, 1:34 AM
I ended up doing chores till sundown Saturday so I didn't get as much time to draw but with enough redbull I was able to make sure this page at least got done in time for Monday. I'm still not completely satisfied with the dialogue in panel 2 but it's 4:30 and I will probably think clearer after some sleep.
Oh ya and as you might have guessed from the comic above I am retconing the first three pages a bit. Those as they are now are done with a different “actor”. As part of practicing with the tablet I have been working on redoing those pages, and will be updating them soon and moving the old pages somewhere up now-ish as filler.


She tied herself up? It sure doesn't look like she could have done that herself. Besides, who says bondage isn't a good way to start a comic? ;)

3rd Oct 2011, 9:17 AM edit delete reply

I'm sure Hollywood would have some kind of trick rope that would let her tie her self up, especially since you can't seen behind her. if not then the director would have been caught in a lie, and just think of the consequences of that. I mean if the narration is unreliable what can you believe?

3rd Oct 2011, 3:28 PM edit delete reply

you got to remember that she is an actor. even if she didn't tie her self up she had to be ok with it, else i assume she would have ad-libed something.

3rd Oct 2011, 9:29 PM edit delete reply

That is a very ominous revelation there Kai...who can you believe?

3rd Oct 2011, 10:12 PM edit delete reply

Me? I believe myself, but I'm bias and not always the best judge of character.

PS I lied I think I'm a rather good judge of character, but you can totally take the rest as gospel.

3rd Oct 2011, 11:56 PM edit delete reply

Retconning!? You monster now all my puns won't make any sense..This does change director Robin dynamics though, potentially for the better. Director might want to be careful since Robins watching carefully, play up the omnipotence and all that.

3rd Oct 2011, 3:15 PM edit delete reply

you don't have any comments on the first three pages. if you have any about them elsewhere then don;t worry they will still be on the site for new readers to know (eventually) that the comic use to start that way. I just don't want to scare anyone away before they give the comic a chance.

as for changing their dynamic it will hopefully be an improvement while still allowing Robin to talk back same as before.

3rd Oct 2011, 3:24 PM edit delete reply

let's see....

collar 6
nic buxom
... that's all i can think of at the moment.

4th Oct 2011, 6:57 AM edit delete reply

Well I'd never start a comic that way (if you know i couldn't change it later).

5th Oct 2011, 2:30 AM edit delete reply

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