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in Damsel and Distress

27th Aug 2017, 1:34 AM
I had to push through a bit of writer's block to get this page started but I'm kind of like how it turned out. I especially like Charity's expression in panel 2.

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Was the "obviously" in the third panel supposed to be Charity? Looked like it should have been Robin.

17th Oct 2011, 11:46 AM edit delete reply

I had originally planed on only using half a beat to break up charity's three word bubbles in that panel but with the figures and spacing of negative space i decided to put that bubble in the middle. that gave it a much bigger beat which was a bit more then i wanted for the continuation of charity speaking. now that you mention it that spacing could favor Robin saying it instead. I'm about to head to bed so i think i will sleep on it and decide after i wake up.

17th Oct 2011, 11:54 AM edit delete reply

She says she was "punching the director" like it was the most normal thing in the world.

17th Oct 2011, 12:23 PM edit delete reply

Barreytor, you mean it isnt? :)

17th Oct 2011, 1:22 PM edit delete reply

Seems to be a pretty normal occurrence(hopefully) for Robin. Of course to quote the eminent Terry Prachet" That was like wearing copper armor, during a thunderstorm, while standing at the top of a hill with your feet in a bucket of water shouting 'All Gods are ninnies!'"
Just not good practice you know.

17th Oct 2011, 3:27 PM edit delete reply

if chapter 1 was Robin vs the narrator, chapter two was sparky, chapter 3 charity, chapter 4 will be robin vs my avatar.

17th Oct 2011, 10:28 PM edit delete reply

I am really, really, REALLY looking forward to Charity's reaction on Wednesday. This has the potential to be awesome and game changing. ^^

17th Oct 2011, 3:29 PM edit delete reply

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